clear double page spreadeasy to readinteresting use of colourswell done
the use of yellow colour as a background realy gives the page a glowing look and brings to life the writing and the images. well done
i feel that the double page article is far too simple and use of colour quite bland. expand on the colours and font to really bring out the potential of the this double page spread.
better 2nd draft of your double page spread. the colour scheme is much better than before. my only concern is that the yellow lines look hand drawn and therefore tones down the professionalism of the double page spread. however very good effort xx
clear double page spread
ReplyDeleteeasy to read
interesting use of colours
well done
the use of yellow colour as a background realy gives the page a glowing look and brings to life the writing and the images. well done
ReplyDeletei feel that the double page article is far too simple and use of colour quite bland. expand on the colours and font to really bring out the potential of the this double page spread.
ReplyDeletebetter 2nd draft of your double page spread. the colour scheme is much better than before.
ReplyDeletemy only concern is that the yellow lines look hand drawn and therefore tones down the professionalism of the double page spread.
however very good effort
xx